Common Errors.

1. Bow tie is a bit too small,I leave that up to you to resize.
2. Eyes are inconsistant.
3. The T-principle in perspective is not present,making the image look kinda flat.
4. Bigger shoes needed.
5. The shark on the board does not have a petrocal fin.
6. Muzzle looks a bit twisted.
7. Not so much details (You can get more details soon,it's just a bit lazy-drawn...keep working on him though.)
8. Incorrect anatomy.
9. Glove error,looks broken.
10. Shirt looks a bit dull.
11. Perhaps the mouth isn't long enough?
12. I forgot the last one.
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Not all these errors are critical,some are personal though.

13.Forgetting your 12'th error..

Yes, put your opinion on my drawing in the forums, for all to see, despite it only being relevant to me... Please, make it a PM. This is kind of a useless post.

Sausage.

I don't get this at all.

Anatomy is incorrect on some points,like the legs,they are thin near their waist but gets wider as it gets further down their legs.

And the eyes are crooked and they don't seem the same,it's like one of the eyes are big and the other to small. Perspective-wise,it's correct but I still don't like how his left eye looks so big at it's bottom edge.

Could you please explain the other ones, or perhaps, take a look at the base I used?

It's gonna take a while.

I can wait.