I've been thinking of a thriller/horror story...

This is set back in the 1930's before the war started. Mainly because I thought that having everything set in the future and present day was getting a bit boring. Anyway...

A man is on a ship, coming home to England. However, the ship is attacked and starts to sink with nobody knowing what was causing it, but deaths were piling up quickly. He tries to escape by using a raft, although after he almost makes it out of sight something (I'm not going to say what this "something" is, but you'll have to find out).

He wakes up to find himself on a beach of England, luckily. However, things weren't what he wanted them to be... throughout the story, he sees images of what happened on the ship that haunt him, and slowly starts to unveil his own horrific past.

That was the most I could post without really spoiling it, but I'd like your thoughts on it. It would be appreciated.

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...Who the fuck voted "It sucks"?

Idk,I Voted "Meh"

It's decent I suppose. It could be better!

Jason.
XD

And what do you think it's missing...?

needs..normal people.... 8D

and insane day-dream nightmares!

It is gonna have a couple of other sane survivors, and the whole thing pretty much involves him going insane through the whole thing.

I probably didn't put in enough info, but that's all I'm going to say...

Quit lazing around and create the story...In your 20+ you gotta be productive 24/7 !...well..in Singapore... >_>

Apart from the fact of only getting 2 people viewing the story.

Meh, maybe tomorrow. I'm too tired to do it right now...

Alright.

You want publicity? I can handle that =D

Alternately I could change it into an RP... although knowing some people, they'll cut to revealing and fighting the invaders/enemies within the first two pages.

Like, er, who, specifically?

<_>

Me.

I wasn't gonna say you, but whatever you say.

Honestly...I do cut the crap and get into solving the mysteries...XD

So it is better if I control the villain!