The first lesson about making your roleplays better is to add content.
"Joe Clyde Attacked Hanidon."
How did he attack hanadon?
"Joe clyde cautiously attacked hanadon."
Why did he attack hanadon?
"In reaction to hanadon's tactical strike, Joe clyde cautiously strked hanadon at the ankles."
The point is that by adding describing and informative words, its possble to expand your roleplaying content, and actually make it a whole lot more interesting in the first place. Just take this final version of the attack as an example:
"As Hanadon attempted to strike Joe Clyde on his head, He dodged it and struck the leftmost ankle of hanadon, causing him to bleed critically."
See the difference? Adding more content to a post can make it a whole lot better!